Shot
|
Angle
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Mov.
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Description
|
Cast
|
Notes
|
ELS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Establishing shot of yarn on the wall, maybe window?,
subtle movement with a gust of wind
|
N/A
|
Make sure the background doesn’t look overly messy;
get enough of a CU
|
ELS/ CU (?)
|
VARIED
|
PAN/
CIRCLE
|
Shots of the yarn around the room, like someone’s
eyes following its trails
|
N/A
|
|
ELS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Main C. lying on the bed, eyes closed, the door’s
POV, surrounded by red yarn (everywhere)
|
Emma
|
SLEEPING but upset; not peaceful sleeping
|
ECU
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Eyes of MC, opening – visibly sad
|
Emma
|
Slow, hesitant
|
A/MS
|
N/A
|
TRY
|
MC in the center of the shot, turn to her left side
and starts playing with the yarn (‘automatic manner’)
|
Emma
|
TRY both as a cut and a physical camera movement
|
ECU
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC’s hand, playing with the yarn around her
|
Emma
|
AUTOMATIC
|
CU
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC looking up, like she’s observing the yarn above
her
|
Emma
|
A cutaway to the pans of the yarn around the room
|
ELS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC singing to the lyrics of the whole song, sitting
in the middle of the bed, eyes tearing up, staring directly into the camera
|
Emma
|
Filler – make Emma sing through the whole song
|
MS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC sitting up against the bedframe, hugging her
knees, looking the yarn around her, starts playing with the yarn
|
Emma
|
Cut out when she looks down on the yarn!
|
MS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC making shapes with the yarn
|
Emma
|
Continued from the previous shot
|
MS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC destroying the yarn, shaking her head (shaking off
the flashback of Freddy)
|
Emma
|
Same camera arrangement!
|
A
|
HIGH
|
N/A
|
MC making shapes with the yarn (aerial)
|
Emma
|
Try two camera positions
|
MS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC hugs her knees again, puts her head on her knees
(sitting against her bedframe)
|
Emma
|
Same as the ones when she’s playing with the yarn
|
MS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Continuation from the previous shot, profile shot of
her cheek touching her knees
|
Emma
|
Match on action!
|
CU
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Same shot, second verse of the song (“You say I will
never change my ways” and onwards, to cut later), ends with her putting her
head against the bedframe again
|
Emma
|
Closer look at her face, lip syncing
|
LS
|
HIGH-ISH
|
N/A
|
MC returns to laying position, visibly resigned,
almost bored and exhausted
|
Emma
|
Make it look natural – Emma must be comfy!
|
MS
|
HIGH-ISH
|
N/A
|
Empty white shot of the bed, the character entering
the frame from the bottom/top
|
Emma
|
Try both! Also, match on action
|
LS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC sitting up again, clenching her fists on the cover
(energetic bit of the song about to begin)
|
Emma
|
DETERMINATION
|
LS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Energetic bit playing, MC looks to her side (staring
off into the distance) and at the yarn around her, visibly determined
|
Emma
|
Shot continued
|
LS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Continues from the previous shot, on one of the
sides, looking at the bedframe behind her back
|
Emma
|
Try both sides!
|
LS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC goes back to sitting upright, wipes away her tears
and stands up on the bed OR throws legs off the bed and wipes away her tears
|
Emma
|
B O T H again, whichever
looks better
|
LS/MS
|
VARIES
|
VARIES
|
MC starts taking the yarn off
the walls, bedframe, whole room – focus on jump cuts, energetic but gentle
movements, take it in a chaotic circle; different levels in every single
place so a nice sequence forms
|
Emma
|
As the yarn gets cleaned up,
more and more furniture and colour returns into the room
|
LS/MS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
As ending approaches, editing
and movements slow down, all the yarn cleaned up APART from the ring finger
bit
|
Emma
|
CARDBOARD BOX
|
LS/MS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC looking at the yarn on her
finger
|
Emma
|
|
ECU
|
HIGH-ISH
|
N/A
|
MC smiling gently
|
Emma
|
|
LS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC taking off the ‘ring’
|
Emma
|
|
MS + CU
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Shot of MC hiding all the
yarn into a chest/box
|
Emma
|
|
LS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
MC hiding the box/chest under
the bed, and leaving the room – contrasting one of the first opening shots of
the video
|
Emma
|
OR puts next to her on the
bed and leaves
|
CU
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Profile shot of the character, lip syncing, lying
down on her back (chorus)
|
Emma
|
Mark down where the camera is! Freddy arriving later
|
CU
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Same shot of Freddy as the character, same lyrics,
same position (chorus)
|
Phil
|
Make sure it’s IDENTICAL, MAKE SURE no yarn
|
LS/A
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Bird’s eye view of the two characters lying in bed,
‘sleeping’, no yarn, one grabs the other’s hand
|
Phil, Emma
|
NO YARN! Emma’s shirt can’t be the same as in the
rest of the video OR not visible; different colour blanket
|
LS/MS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Freddy and MC sitting on the bed, talking about
something
|
Phil, Emma
|
Emma must be wearing a different shirt (coloured!)
|
LS/MS
|
N/A
|
N/A
|
Continues from the previous shot, but now the
conversation looks more like an argument
|
Phil, Emma
|
Research & Planning: Shotlist
Since writing the treatment, I have changed and added certain shots; when putting together the animatic I realised that I might be lacking some footage if I go through with my original ideas. Hence why shots I haven't thought of before appear on the shotlist for my video.
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